FuShaMan

This story has a complex variety of characters, all struggling to a degree with social expectations, duty and desire. The desire for freedom, the desire for power, the desire for peace...all in the realm of medieval fantasy. The young princesses trying to defeat the Queen usurping their throne while fighting off a wealthy, power-starved family of suitors. A happy ending is not guaranteed. https://www.wattpad.com/story/200328692

FuShaMan

This story has a complex variety of characters, all struggling to a degree with social expectations, duty and desire. The desire for freedom, the desire for power, the desire for peace...all in the realm of medieval fantasy. The young princesses trying to defeat the Queen usurping their throne while fighting off a wealthy, power-starved family of suitors. A happy ending is not guaranteed. https://www.wattpad.com/story/200328692

alcoholandcaffeine

Hey, thanks for adding Whiskey Latte to your reading list! Hope you enjoy it ❤️

alcoholandcaffeine

@FuShaMan haha, hopefully she lives up to your expectations! :) 
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FuShaMan

@alcoholandcaffeine No problem, she sounds like an interesting character, I'm looking forward to seeing how she develops :)
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ManchesterWriter

Thank you so much for reading.

ManchesterWriter

@FuShaMan - that’s a v kind thing to say, thank you.
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FuShaMan

 @ManchesterWriter not a problem, you put in more effort with the details and description than most writers I've seen on wattpad. So far it's flowing really well and the protagonist is relatable (even when under the influence of some mysterious magic ;) )
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ManchesterWriter

Hi, thank you for adding ‘Farfalen: The Lost’  to your reading list, I appreciate it. I’m posting new stuff Friday, Sunday and Wednesday.

ManchesterWriter

@FuShaMan I don't think you have an issue. I finished it so far (earlier) and the story tells itself, your subject matter is captivating. You're presenting fact whilst maximising suspense and raising questions - I think that's the best way. It's got a very natural feel. Well done.
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FuShaMan

@ManchesterWriter Thanks! The difficult thing with non fiction is keeping it gripping, so I'm always open to advice and constructive criticism :) 
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eggqueenwera

Thanks for adding my books to your reading list! Also, good luck to you with graduate school. I'm getting ready to start this fall ^^

eggqueenwera

@FuShaMan Sure thing! That sounds really cool. I always love reading about that kind of stuff.
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FuShaMan

@LuliWrites if you do start writing your paranormal crime novel let me know, I love to read that kind of thing. In my home town those were always the stories people would talk about when we got together. We had a woman in white who purposely caused car crashes, supposed doppelgangers, and small scale ghosts that locked people down out of their houses ;) it's always fun hearing other people's stories, fiction and non fiction alike
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eggqueenwera

@FuShaMan Thanks! If I ever get time, yes! I have a very rough idea for a paranormal/crime novel but it's kind of on the backburner until I finish some of my stories. Medical fiction and drama have been taking up most of my inspiration lately 
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