Ga5be12

Did a lot of edits and am quickly approaching the final draft, I posted the new and improved Prologue and Chapter One. Each has some significant and minor differences to enrich and improve the story in my opinion.
          	
          	Thank you for existing,
          	Gabe

Ga5be12

Did a lot of edits and am quickly approaching the final draft, I posted the new and improved Prologue and Chapter One. Each has some significant and minor differences to enrich and improve the story in my opinion.
          
          Thank you for existing,
          Gabe

Ga5be12

Added a flashback at the end of Chapter Eight to add emotional impact

sad_lil_plant

@Ga5be12 
            ofc you did. 
            i'm emotionally not prepared.
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Ga5be12

Did not expect that much views in one day, if you have any suggestions or questions about True Colors, please don't hesitate to tell me!

Ga5be12

@sad_lil_plant Disciples? It's too easy but it's all I can think of right now
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