guywortheyauthor
Hello. This isn't about your Clockwork story, but about its descriptive blurb. It needs a hook, namely your MC and his problem.
The bulleted list of physics laws is not appealing to a typical reader. You'll want a compelling blurb as step one in getting readers. I notice that there is blurb-help to be had on the forums.
Pardon the unsolicited advice, but your entry on the "Share Your Story" thread mentioned that you desire more people reading your work.
guywortheyauthor
I'm a physicist, haha, so I'm /a bit/ different. Thanks for your grace and positivity.
GadgetTriggerfuse
@guywortheyauthor Thank you for the feedback. What!? People don't love physics? That actually makes quite a bit of sense thinking about it. I'll check out the forums then. And even if it was unsolicited, I appreciate it. I'm posting on multiple websites with the same blurb and seeing similar relative results, so I'll give changing it a go.
