I read your poem for a thousand words and I just wanted to tell how good it truly is. I would have left just a comment, but I thought this gives the recognition it deserves. You most certainly have a poetic soul, from your name to your poem. It was so complete, and such a great representation of the characters and their relationship.... you should pursue poetry, and don't give it up.
She was a girl
Who dared
To face the unknown
To document things
No one else dared to see.
She was a girl
Who felt the urge
The give the world
A Gift.
The Gift was of words.
The girl saw, and heard, and spoke, and felt,
And the gift blessed her.
It wrapped her in a web of thoughts
and made her special.
She was a red rose in a white garden.
a girl who sang in a world of silence.
she called herself 'Gaikokuno'
and she became
unknowingly
a gift.
a gift to mankind.
:)