GamerIsHere6
Hey y'all, thanks for all the love and support.
My main question is: can people actually understand what happened in the reaction? I wanted to challenge myself by setting up a proper reaction environment with a stage, audience, and everything that comes with it. I also want to know if the writing was good overall.
Was the manipulation well thought out? Did Kiyotaka's behavior and personality shifts make sense? Were the clues he left behind subtle but noticeable enough for the smarter viewers to piece together? And does the attention naturally shift away from Shirou (my OC), or does it feel forced?
Of course, I'll keep writing. Looking back, it was probably a combination of sleep deprivation and being sick—I’ve had this cold for six days now—that made me feel so down over a single critique. To be fair, the person wasn't hating on my work at all. They even apologized in case they had hurt my feelings. I just reacted badly in the moment. I think most people have experienced something similar, where one comment hits harder than it normally would when you're already exhausted or not feeling your best.
akotsireszie
@GamerIsHere6 its great. You dont need to over thing it just write what ever come in your mind how you like to proceed and don't let others influence your writing because of thier criticism ignore them. I love your 2 lazy masterpiece and much more the reaction part hehe. and the manipulation is really good. Can't wait for your next update author many thanks for your efforts.
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