Hey guys, I'd really appreciate it if you'd read my story! I'm working on my writing everyday to improve and it'd help a lot if you comment on what you think of it. I'm most definitely open to constructive criticism. 

Please read/vote/comment and you can either comment on my story or pm me with questions/comments. And please, please, pm me if you have an suggestions it really will help a lot.

Thanks so much!



-Dawn