Hey can u read my story
I read urs... ok so ik ur trying to introduce everyone but maybe its be better if u made this one day where the girl embarrased her about the crush, they all laughed at her, she cries in the bathroom starts cutting, and her and her friends decide to plan to turn their lives around instead
Or she dies from the cutting and hurts them as a ghost
Idk what u have in mind but thats my recommendation