GoCrazy17

Hi everyone! So I just published the edited version of the Prologue of I'm a Fighter. Please let me know what you guys think of it?
          	
          	http://www.wattpad.com/22615827-i%27m-a-fighter-prologue-bob%27s-brother-bradley/page/3
          	
          	Thanks lovelies! Hope you're all having a smashing day xxx