Goofy_Reader

Thanks for the follow, any reason for it? :)
          
          Cap'n

Thank you so much for following me I really hope that you enjoy my books if you're looking to read a dark story then I recommend either The ToyMakers or What's Your Demon. :)

@Sidney-C-Grey I've now finished some of it and I would like for feedback 
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@Sidney-C-Grey It seems to be going good I guess but the two characters you meet in the prolouge play an important role

@Sidney-C-Grey yay u guessed where I got that scene from but thank u for advice. I'm thinking of having a prolouge. it won't be the river more like tornado or earth quake

@Sidney-C-Grey I am starting to write a story and I am thinking of calling it Gifted it is basically a story about a guy who is an orphan parents died when he was 2 and he is in highschool. He finds out he has powers on a school trip when the bus crashed and was about to fall into the river. does this sound like a good story plz I would your feedback

@Sidney-C-Grey Well it reminds me of the Micheal vey series and another book series which I forgot its name, but I like how it is unique in its own way and the character's remind me of a few of my friends. All in all it's a pretty good book and I'm start making one because of it this is actually my second profile I forgot my first one and so I might write a story.
          
          Wow that was long