Lord Peverell-Potter-Black

Why is the punctuation missing in all your stories?

OK I'm gonna give it to you straight. I love love love the idea you have about your story 'Harry potter and the rune' (I'm not sure if I got that right). But it's all over the place. I can't really tell the difference between when their speaking or doing something and how you skipped out certain parts of the original show such as how Harry meet Hermione on the train (you see that part kinda got me confused because I thought this was a harmione story). You see when you leave out certain parts, it's has too effects on the reader. Either they'll be confused or they'll like the change and go with it then again, I can't speck for everyone that read your story. I'm sure a lot of people will love it and lots will hate it. I don't love it but I don't hate it either so I hope you don't think I'm hating on your story. I just got really really really really really confused along the way.

OK I'm gonna give it to you straight. I love love love the idea you have about your story 'Harry potter and the rune' (I'm not sure if I got that right). But it's all over the place. I can't really tell the difference between when their speaking or doing something and how you skipped out certain parts of the original show such as how Harry meet Hermione on the train (you see that part kinda got me confused because I thought this was a harmione story). You see when you leave out certain parts, it's has too effects on the reader. Either they'll be confused or they'll like the change and go with it then again, I can't speck for everyone that read your story. I'm sure a lot of people will love it and lots will hate it. I don't love it but I don't hate it either so I hope you don't think I'm hating on your story. I just got really really really really really confused along the way.

Hey the story Percy Jackson God of Time and Tides is good but needs better puntuation (not tring to be rude because I suck at spelling some times lol)

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