Kwolfie

Hey! I really liked your book/sotry “Claimed by the Sea” and would love your feedback on a personal work I’ve been writing. I don’t have it posted on my account but would gladly give you the word document or another form of the story if you’re up to give feedback! Again, love your writing style and I’m literally in love with how you described the scenery in your book/story!!❤️

Haly143

@Kwolfie I really like the way you built up your scenes — the descriptions are great, and I love that it has this anime‑inspired vibe <3 Maybe you could try adding a few more paragraph breaks, just so the text feels more structured and easier to read. Also thanks for sharing your story with me. Have fun writing the next chapters <3
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Kwolfie

@Haly143 ok I FINALLY got the chance to post!! Right now I only have my prologue and first chapter but plan to add more later, and I can't wait for you to read it!!!⋆.˚
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Kwolfie

@Haly143 not sure if my other responses went through for you cause this is like my 4th try because the other ones kept disappearing but thank you again! When I have time I will post the story on my account and will probably come back here to post and let you know. Again thank you sm!
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