Hello
I just finished reading your story. Is it really finished? I see so many potential in your story. I love the kingdom hopping, the wanders and wonders, and at the same time, Pristine’s resolve. I just wish there was more elaborate details on the adventure, more characters he encountered, and more challenges. Good luck to you!
P.S. You may read my Auralythes book series for a sample world building. xoxo