Marauderssimp20008

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Hello, my readers, I just want some feedback on my book. I can take whatever. I just want some criticism. 

Idea a month after Jacey and Marlene started dating Jacey ask Marlene what she thinks of werewolf’s and Marlene says some bad stuff so Jacey breaks up with her 
          Just an idea don’t expect you to use it

I love ur book!

Thank you my readers for reading my first ever fanfic. Love you guys.

How does it feel to have 6.66k readers in your first book, also I really like your story great job