Poem/Quote Writer

Hi! sorry for posting this here out of the blue. I hope you don’t mind. So uh, I need a helping hand for my friend’s first ever published poem. I hope you guys will check it out, it would be a great help to us. Thank you in advance! :)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/269609581

You deserve appreciation
          Oh! my umbilical connect.
          Nine months journey was not easy,
          obstacles came on your way,
          but your passion and compassion made me to say.
          
          No one can be compared to you,
          and none could be like you.
          Oh! my umbilical connect,
          you deserve my appreciation.
          
          When the journey showed sign to end,
          oh! my umbilical connect.
          You did not block me to bend,
          but you allowed me to descend.
          
          Who could do this?
          It's only you my umbilical connect.
          
          At toddler, you loved me.
          At baby, you shaped me,
          and when I grew up,you trained me.
          Oh! my umbilical connect,
          you ought to be praise.
                        Written By:Isaac Mensah 
                                                  Science 2
            Edinaman Senior High School

Hi, i would really appreciate if you would read my book! Hope you enjoy it! 
          
          I will update the book everyday!✨
          
          Lots of luv,
          
          - @Stupidah1
          
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Please Read My Two New Poems/Quotes!
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