TidimaloFatso
thnx for following me ; )
HerobrineGirl984
HerobrineGirl984
I'll post chapter 2 tomorrow and if I could add anything else to the story plz tell me so I can fix it because you guys can tell me anyhting
Mysterious_Demanded
just some feedback on your story; it seems like your basically just using it as a journal instead of a story. spelling errors and punctuation errors also. you make it sound like your talking to a friend instead of an audience.
Mysterious_Demanded
@Mysterious_Demanded my advice is to just read a few stories and take notes on how to write a good story that people would love to read