Hoaxy13
Read my new book guys!!! yes it goes on and on at the start buuuuuuuuuuuuut it will get better in the next chapter. hopefully. anyway i cant finish my books without your help! i have problems finishing big projects so please help!
Hoaxy13
Hoaxy13
hai guys im so sorry i havent been posting but ive been busy and stuck and yes i have decided to try and finish another book that i will be posting sometime in the future and is sad starting and drags on a little i know but should hopefully be alright as i am having help from a friend
Hoaxy13
HAIYA GUYS! I'm posting the remake so please read it!
Hoaxy13
hey guys!!! i'm posting the new remake first few chapters later today. i've had two people read over it first so hopefully not too many mistakes, but if u notice any, please tell me in the comments! and please try to be polite about it as i've been trying so hard to fix it. and yes i do realise i made a mistake with the story but i am leaving it.
jasmine_westd
@Hoaxy13 I just finished reading it and omg it's so good I really need to read the next chapter! And thanks for making my character so cool haha <3 I edited a few little things but I don't think its worth sending to you because it was fairly good already. I'm impressed! :)
Hoaxy13
Hey guys i know its really bad and stuff BUT i have started to rewrite this book. will be posted as a separate book but if u have any ideas or have positive criticism feel free to tell me! yes i will try to fix punctuation, try to keep it first person and make it all past tense. im also giving them proper personalities and feelings cause i reread it and they have no personalities or emotions! i mean come on who wouldnt freak out after finding out about who they could change to??? help would greatly appreciated though!!! i wrote this book early last year but i only posted it because my friends said i should. anyway i forgot to check it before i posted so i am now fixing it up. yes the story is slightly different but! it is still practically the same. also the main character is more funny and humourers then before or at least hopefully. ill post the first chapter soon! and if ya want tell me how i can fix it more! will take a very long time to complete though without help. sorry if this annoys u but i wanna get better at writing storys!
jasmine_westd
@Hoaxy13 Hey, I can proofread and edit a few chapters if you need. Just send me an email or a message I will be happy to do it. Sounds awesome x
Hoaxy13
hey guys! i would appreciate if u could tell me what to do next... im really stuck and until i can get some help my book will probably be on hold... im sorry for any inconviences
lunalee3
hey holy cheese
Hoaxy13
help me with my writers block for the second book!!!! i can put a character in for u if u help me!!!
Hoaxy13
hey guys!!! i posted the second book!!! remember this motto that i do though, a good author knows never to kill a main character or they are going to have to deal with a lot of angry people XD