HoshikuzuEnt

I am going to post parts of a story I am writing for feedback. I rather that if you cannot make intelligent comments or give constructive advice then do not tell me anything. I do not want to hear very negative feedback on my work. For those who are going to help I thank you in advance.

HoshikuzuEnt

I am going to post parts of a story I am writing for feedback. I rather that if you cannot make intelligent comments or give constructive advice then do not tell me anything. I do not want to hear very negative feedback on my work. For those who are going to help I thank you in advance.