@Gygan_9835 so if i am reading it correctly, i cant read and remember properly since i have dementia, sorry, but what you are saying is my story is basically a what if, and i can continue is as that? right?, and i actually needed some tips as i am new, since this particular story has a lots of characters, the things is, i was planning to add 3 or 4 game characters in the story, and i pretty much need them for my vision, plus if you have read the notes, this is not the only book i will add, there would be different books for connecting the story more, and making it more impactful, I actually have to ask a lot since its my first time talking to a professional in work, not to disrespect you but this is the way i talk , so it , it might seem pretty informal right now, plus it looks like a mess of words, can we talk on discord if possible? or maybe on call? i cant ask everything on this, i dont think it is possible but if you agree... maybe.. meh forget it, and thank you actually for letting me continue, your story has a lot of grips and moment that resonate with my type of reading, since i dont read harem that much, i love it in a way where everyone likes him but he doesnt, keep the romance and harem enough but not too much to the point where you have to make it part of the plot, and yeah i blabbered a lot i guess, anyways, i hope you under stood it and will give me some tips, and i actually wanted an opinion on my story since i am not confident,
bye sir
shall the luck be with you
