IAmOneOfTheFallen

The worst feeling of all is when you dont have anything to feel.

IAmOneOfTheFallen

Hey everyone! I have a new story up its called Death carried on fairies wings. Its a maleficent based fanfic type thing, there is no spoilers if you haven't seen the movie. I would really appreciate it if  you could check it out! Thanks guys. ^.^

IAmOneOfTheFallen

Hello everyone, I have recently uploaded three new short stories that I would like to get feedback on. I would like to continue with them as well as update my already existing stories. If you have a preference please leave a comment on my page or send me a message. I finally have time to write, as well inspiration and I don't want it to go to waste.

LadyDawn

Hello
          Thank you so much for following. Love your bio it is very to the point, and I couldn't agree with you more, get your work out there then worry about it later sometimes things just need to be said so we ourselves can see what is inside our own heads it amazes me what I write sometimes. LOL Nice having you as a fan
          Dawn

TerryP

@IAmOneOfTheFallen.   Since you are still relatively new to Wattpad, please accept my unofficial welcome.
          
          While I do see things you can improve in your writing, I find some of them in writers with followers into the thousands and reads into hundreds of thousandsz.
          
          Congratulations.  You're "a 14 ish year old kid," whose writing is far better than mine at that age.
          
          Two things that strike me. First, you are keeping some kind of writing notebook. So you will not lose ideas.
          
          Second, you're not so attached to you're works that criticism will discourage you.
          
          You see, writing is a craft that we can get better at. Rare is a writer popular such as Anthony Trollope, who rarely revised his work.
          
          Writing is a craft in which we work hard to make our words look easy.
          
          While I am not available to help you with editing, I can suggest some books on writing and some literature for you to acquire over the years to give you depth to your reading experience and stories eventually.
          
          You have a start already with your knowledge of sirens.
          
          Good luck and enjoy Wattpad.