Sereneflow

Hey hi!! I am a new writer, writing my first story. Can you please read and comment on it so that helps me gain some review. It would be a great help if you give me some insights. If you are into mystery and romance please give it a try.
          
          Aditya and Tanisha find themselves meeting again and again despite wanting nothing more than staying away from each other. Aditya is a special crime branch head chasing a crime while Tanisha is a school teacher running away from a secret.
          Circumstances lead them to meet each other for a small time forming a truce only to get seperated again.
          But this time, Aditya decides to marry her. What made him take that decision? And how is she going to react to it? 
          What happened to the case he is solving?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390516339

Ikaa_writes

Hey Ikaa here,
          Sorry for posting this without your permission, but if you want , can you try my book 'Endearing love'. It's an old school, soft and cute romance kind of love. Female lead will be chaotic, clumsy but strong and passionate about her career, and male lead will be disciplined, man of morals, little grumpy but not kind of rude 
          And cherry on top there are not only one couple in this story . It's a kind of family friendly story
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/368457172?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Ikaa_writes