@1Derful_Aubrey Thanks! I just started a story. It's only like 3 paragraphs, but I wanna see what people think. If you see something wrong or you don't like something, or you just see an error, please tell me. If it's something you don't like, I change it and people like it better, then, That is COMPLETELY fine with me. I enjoy when people critcize my writing a little bit, because it makes me a better writer. SAME FOR EVERYONE, TELL ME WHEN I AM WRITING STUFF THAT YOU DONT THINK MAKES SENSE, I CAN FIX IT AND THEN MORE PEOPLE CAN READ, (and enjoy) MY STORIES!!!! Thank you. Sorry for this really long message!