HeeroVision
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ArthurArun
Hey upload your work in my latest book and also tell your other friends to join
IsPreshahBaby
@ArthurArun- I get that but i had always struggled with poetry and those were for an assignment so i had just tried my best.
ArthurArun
Hey i read your poem and honestly it was good like it was deep considering your age as you wrote it in 11th class and the poem i really liked is prison it was good but i it would have been great if you had used strong language but still its a great poem
IsPreshahBaby
@ArthurArun- Thank you so much. I do think it needs improvement as well. What do you mean by strong language though?
ArthurArun
I read your i donno book it was really great all your chapters are really good but i feel you should try writing stories.
IsPreshahBaby
@ArthurArun- Aw thank you, that means a lot. Ive been told that I should, and I also want to someday. But I just struggle with motivation. All I've ever written is short stories so far, but after I find something to write about and figure out how to space it out to make it long enough to be a book then ill start writing stories. But I appreciate the sentiment :)
ArthurArun
Hey hi
ArthurArun
@ArthurArun hey new chapter of THE FATE is realised hope you will like it and give your honest review