Its_just_Dafni

Hey guys! 
          	It's been a while since I've updated a status on here, but I just wanted to first of all thank you for being so patient  and supportive. I'm so happy to read all your nice comments on my stories. And secondly I'd like to inform you loves that I'm participating in this years Watty awards with my story Neverland, so keep reading and voting please, it would mean so much to me.  
          	Thank you once again for all your support, I love you 
          	xxx
          	Its_just_Dafni

Anna_M_Ruby

Sweetie, on your Peter Pan story you need to fix your grammar. Your dialogue is grammatically incorrect. Which you may say you are correct, but look in a real published (paper) book. Look at the dialogue. Is it like yours? No, because yours is wrong. Please fix it or you will not only loose me as a reader, but people who enjoy correct grammar. 

Anna_M_Ruby

Thanks. Spanish is fun. And I look forward to reading your story
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Its_just_Dafni

@Anna_M_Ruby It's alright. No harm has happened, we're good. And I too didn't mean to come over as rude if you thought I was. But of course, the story isn't exactly a book. I mean even when you read it on here, it does not exactly feel or look like a book. Especially since people (myself included), write an authour's note at the end of almost every chapter. But think of it like this, every book that has come out (Harry Potter, TMI etc.) had it's grammatic flaws which were corrected by someone. I am however glad to hear that you do like the subject of my story, it means a lot to me and I surely will inform you when I have the grammar corrected. 
            P.S. I really like the Spanish language ;)
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Anna_M_Ruby

@Its_just_Dafni Sorry if I came off rude, it didn't help that my siblings wouldn't stop asking me questions while I was typing this, I thought I sent you a private message. And to me, if it doesn't look like a book (grammar wise) its very, very hard to read and understand. I would have continued reading otherwise. I do not doubt that you have a good story, and I'd like to continue reading, but it is hard to take in the words since my mind tells me grammar is wrong. And inform me when you change the grammar because I'd love to read your story! P.S. My first language is Spanish.
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Its_just_Dafni

Hey guys! 
          It's been a while since I've updated a status on here, but I just wanted to first of all thank you for being so patient  and supportive. I'm so happy to read all your nice comments on my stories. And secondly I'd like to inform you loves that I'm participating in this years Watty awards with my story Neverland, so keep reading and voting please, it would mean so much to me.  
          Thank you once again for all your support, I love you 
          xxx
          Its_just_Dafni