@Anna_M_Ruby First of all I am really sorry for the late reply.
Secondly, English isn't my first language, so it's obvious that there will be grammar mistakes. I'm human, I'm still learning.
It sadens me that you want to stop reading my story just because of the grammar when in reality, it's all about the story. Until now I haven't had any negative comments on Peter Pan, so I assume people like it and continue reading. I am however correcting my grammar mistakes, not because you said it, but because I know that some things aren't correct and I didn't have much time to fix it until now. So the grammar will be fixed. Thank you for informing me, but I would have appreciated it more if you had send this to me via private message rather than post it on my wall where people could see it.