@Anna_M_Ruby It's alright. No harm has happened, we're good. And I too didn't mean to come over as rude if you thought I was. But of course, the story isn't exactly a book. I mean even when you read it on here, it does not exactly feel or look like a book. Especially since people (myself included), write an authour's note at the end of almost every chapter. But think of it like this, every book that has come out (Harry Potter, TMI etc.) had it's grammatic flaws which were corrected by someone. I am however glad to hear that you do like the subject of my story, it means a lot to me and I surely will inform you when I have the grammar corrected.
P.S. I really like the Spanish language ;)