Ineverygarden

Reading every time you update, yet the Cora and Jasmine story doesn't seem to progress. Cora doesn't seem submissive at all but the book keeps diverting from her past and what her powers may truly hold. The book also spoke about Jasmine wanting to be controlled , tamed, and used or rather being submissive but you don't delve into that. Jasmine is powerful, has a cold exterior and led for generations. But will Cora be the one to bring her soft submissives side. 
          
          Great book author but you're focusing on the outside characters more. Losing the plot a little

JENphoenix12

Also I don't know who in there right mind will be reading over 200 chapters of this story, even I think this story is long asf, honestly speaking I didn't expect it to be this long but here we are  too much needs to happen in this story, so I can't even shorten it smh 
            
            I will be using this book as a learning curve and see want I can improve upon in the next one, hopefully the next one won't have you guys starving for the main characters to get together 
            
            Thanks again this helped me out a lot✨
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JENphoenix12

@Ineverygarden I love your review. Cora's past will be revealed but not now, I wanted to show that something happened to our dare cora regarding her powers so y'all would be curious, certain parts in the story does give you guys hints as to what might've happened to cora. Mhmm jasmine doesn't want to be controlled she wants someone to rough her up in the bedroom and while cora can very well be that monster jasmine is learning not to force things especially when the other person clearly hates her, she even stated that herself after they did have sex. 1 main reason why you don't see any progress with jasmine and cora is simply because there shouldn't be any at least not yet, I know this is a love story but the way I write might differ from how y'all are used to, cora hates jasmine with a passion and as she's stated she won't be with someone she doesn't have feelings even if that person is her mate, if you look back cora made a promise to Liz to not reject her mate and that's frankly the only reason why cora hasn't yet....also now she knows that if she did do that she'd lose even more power hence another reason why she hasn't rejected jasmine. Jasmine does hate cora yes but hate is a strong word, she dislikes that cora is disobedient and doesn't listen to her, also she doesn't like werewolves lol.
            
            Mhmm I don't believe I am losing the plot at all as I'm focusing on duvious which is the main threat to literally everyone, but I'd say the main thing about the story is jasmine and her journey to stop duvious while dealing with other things that come her way, I wanna say more but I would just end up spoiling it. I write in layers so I can understand why you feel as if I am losing the plot, honestly speaking I'd love to hear a review from you again after the book is completed, cause in my head it's already completed and everything makes sense, but from y'all point of view your not seeing the finished product..
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olayinika

Hi author, i just finished to die for  and to say am surprised when I entered ur page and u dont have many followers like girl.what 
          I love u book 
          Thank u 
          U just got a new follower

JENphoenix12

@olayinika Lol I just started so it's to be expected, thanks for the follow ✨ I'm glad you're enjoying the book
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