@JThompson
hey
you still there ???
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of course you are, cos you uploaded a story this year so i'm pretty sure you're here ... you can't fool me ;P
how are you ... it's been so long, but i still remember you =)
Yeah, exactly! 99% of comments on here are one line of praise. So thanks for giving me something to work with.
But thank you for the comment and I did unmark the whole offensive thing...because...um it's not offensive. At all.
Oh my goodness... it wasn't me who marked that comment offensive. I've been away at camp all week with no internet access and just got home today and saw everything. And honestly I was about to come and thank you for the comment, but the message you left me afterwords was just rude. I know that my first chapter is rough-- I put it on wattpad TO GET criticism, not for everyone to tell me how awesome I am or to help my ego. So when I get a comment like yours I'm genuinely open and happy about it.
I'm sorry it got marked offensive and I honest to God have no clue who did that. No need for the condescending message though. Seriously.
OMG
how have you been =D
i missed you =(
my graduation and the ball are over and i'm now officially out of school YAY ^^
how are you ????
has something interesting happened while i was gone ???
TELL ME EVERYTHING :D
haha understand...and well it's not like i would try to say otherwise...i mean we germans are really awesome aren't we ;D xD
i see...well in that case it's good i guess^^...and even so...your story is really good...i mean every story has some flaws especially whe you'renor an experienced writer like me or you^^
..aww thank you...well who knows...i want to translate that story into german and since you can speak and understrand german you might even be able to read it and then tell me how good my german writing is^^ ...but till i translate it there's still a long way to go ; )
haha...hey there
..well thanks for that nice...compliment?? i guess xD
how come youlove germans...did you have some nice encounter with someone from germany or what ???
well...i just read your story "the summer kids" and tried to give you some constructive critique...and i stayed honest =)...i really took my time commenting and i hope it will help you =)
by the way...i updated my story "the prophecy..." and as you know i really appreciate your comments cos they help me a lot...so when you have some time left make sure to read cos i know i can trust you telling me the truth...and if my chapter is just crap then tell me ;D
ugh...i still haven't found the time to read your stuff...so sory bout that...ad now i have to got cos it's already the next morning xD ...it's 01:16 am :D
good night
...sweet dreams
lady of the night ^_^
and i still can't believe you became my fan...maybe it was all a dream and soon i'm going to wake up xD
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how did i come to the honor of YOU fanning ME ????????? ....omg i myself am not sure if i really deserve you as a fan but i'm still SUPER HAPPY
...omg omg omg omg omg ...woah i think i'm hyperventilating xD
just for the record...YOU FANNED ME ?
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
YAY
haha i guess it's time for me to read your stuff huh? ^^...but before i do that i have to eat breakfast :D ...my stomache is growling like crazy^^
OMG YOU FANNED ME :D :D :D :D
well ...see ya
...*breath pamina breath* ---> talking to myself
bye
lady of the night ^_^
oh right...you've told me that^^...sorry that i've forgotten
...somehow i understand you...i noticed that one of the biggest mistakes is when they mix up the gender or the narrotor...those mistakes are really confusing and i notice them that often that it's kinda frustrating me...the same goes for the time...suddenly changing from past to present is really irritating
..when you notice stuff like that just try to stay calm...i'm sure the writers try their hardest (at least most of them^^) and they will be really gratefull if you help them out