Jack_Baldwin

@new_mani I hope you enjoy it... Though you'll probably notice straight away that I'm absolutely guilty of something I've criticised you for - there's so much bloat in there! Once I'm fine with the final two parts I'm going to go through the whole thing with a hacksaw to try and tighten it up. Self editing is difficult! 

Jack_Baldwin

@new_mani hi mani you're very welcome, and it shows that you've got a great attitude to criticism as something positive (I am the same as you but you'd be surprised how many people I've met who don't take it well even when it's one of the best tools to improve!) 
          
          Like I said in my summary I think you've got a really strong vision and it's got great potential