Jadegreen

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I will definitely keep your suggestions in mind!

@jamilla I'm Christian, so I loved For Mature Souls Only! Really struck a cord. I just uploaded another part to my story the Fosters, so I'm like, zoned out of writing right now lol. Anything new for you?

um thanks.... what did u read?

oh well...i dosent look mysterus to me coz i know wats gonna happen........
          thanks for reading, and th lovly comment
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@fantagurl I think you should make it a series about her becoming a warrior, maybe have a twist of her being "the chosen one" they all knew would help them by prophesy or something like that. It was incredibly written and I loved the action. Good on you. 

Hey, can u read my short story Temptation? Im trying 2 decide whether or not i should make it into a book

@Dream_Girl Hey! Just checked them out. 
          
          close by the heart is a bit choppy, but pretty captivating!
          
          Hood star had a great voice. The narrating character definitely pulled me into the story with her bratty accusations and voice. I'm definitely going to read more. 
          
          And you don't think saving Goyra was too mysterious?

hey mind having a look at my stories close by the heart and hood start?
          thanks in advance
          ps i really like saving goyra
          upload soon...and plz msg me when u do