JakeSly

Sorry for the huge absence on my part, I'm surprised I'm still gaining fans and keeping patient followers even though I have posted no content for months. The next chapter of Bioworld will be out soon and perhaps another fan-fic will start.

JakeSly

Hey guys, Chapter IV for Dovahkiin is up, which makes this the quickest update yet and hope to get a few more in before Christmas. I was hoping to make this a lot longer, making the journey to Riverwood consist of The Guardian Stones and of the beginning of Gavan's backstory. Time went quick though and it soon became past 4am. I wanted to upload a chapter tonight but didn't want to try and fit it all in to one chapter and have it more crappy than it should have been so I decided to split it into two chapters. I'm sorry, yes, this chapter will be shorter than the last but I plan to make Chapter V even longer. My friend told me I need to work on my description so I have being trying to improve and think I did better in this chapter, especially describing the scenery at the start. Tell me what you think. Hopefully I will have Chapter V up tomorrow, I'm sure you will all appreciate a very fast update like that. Take care!

JakeSly

The third chapter for Dovahkiin is up. For those who felt the last few chapters were a bit rushed I am finally starting to feel fluent freedom as I write. I think this chapter should be my best yet since I felt some freedom from the original dialogue for once with the first cut-scene now over, it should just get better from here and ever quicker entries being the Summer Holidays, I have 6 or so solid weeks to work on this during the late nights I stay up.
          
          I also now have Skyrim on PC as well so not only will I get a clear, new, better cover for Dovahkiin up I'll also get some screenshots of the characters as well as maybe uploading some gameplay. I will also be starting on a machinima series for another game after I get my new HD PVR for Christmas, which reminds me, Merry Christmas everyone!
          
          If you'd like to subscribe to my Youtube channel the link will be below, just a warning though, I currently have no videos up as yet, that will change though:
          http://www.youtube.com/user/JakeEC01

JakeSly

Just read through my comments now and I'm really happy that I'm starting to get a few fans! Be sure to add Dovahkiin to your Reading List so you can keep a good eye on it and vote it up to get it a bit more attention! Thank you everyone, I have a lot more motivation to write this fan-fic knowing people are waiting to see more! Chapter II is on it's way!

JakeSly

Finally finished the first chapter for Dovahkiin but I feel I rushed it a bit, even though it took me much longer than intended. Anyone who has played Skyrim at least once can tell this is apart of the opening cinematic. I tried to stick to the original dialogue with only altering it slightly and I found it a bit boring and it felt like I was writing somebody else's story rather than mine. When I get to more unique parts of my character I feel I'll do much better.