Jambroseking

I'm taking down the year one story and rewriting it let me know if anyone wants it to come back 

Jambroseking

@ShirleyRose777 can I email you stuff since they removed direct messaging
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ShirleyRose777

@Jambroseking Bribg it back and tell the whole thing this time!
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Jambroseking

I'm taking down the year one story and rewriting it let me know if anyone wants it to come back 

Jambroseking

@ShirleyRose777 can I email you stuff since they removed direct messaging
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ShirleyRose777

@Jambroseking Bribg it back and tell the whole thing this time!
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Jambroseking

To all my subscribers / followers I'm looking for someone to help me with editing as I'm sure many of you have noticed with my stories I am bad at spelling and I have horrible grammar I am going to be picking up writing again but I am going to be very infrequent so if you would be so kind and do any of you who are willing to please contact me that you are willing to edit my thing and I will send and pre-released versions of everything I am writing including my rewrite to have you guys edit and review please share your thoughts with me on my subject to anyone who is willing you have my thanks 

Jambroseking

Review for assassin and her prince
          This story is a fanfiction of the dragon prince Netflix series, centered on Callum and Rayla. It was written before the airing of season 2 are more accurately before the author watched season 2. Therefore there are some Canon discrepancies, but are completely understandable in trueness to the characters they receive a 9 out of 10.
          Grammatically speaking the story has very few flaws I only found one maybe two spelling errors or grammatical errors which they were mostly in the dialogue but they get a passing grade there. The scenes were a little choppy in places but it worked with how the story was. In writing capability they received a 9 out of 10
          The story was primarily a romance with a small bit of adventure towards the end of it it showed the tension between the humans and the elves at this point in the story as well as the close friendship that had developed between the three main characters. The relationship between Rayla and Calum didn't really show until season 3 of the show but they did a very nice job of showing it here how it was in its early stages and have what it could have become under these circumstances. In story intrigue and plot they receive a 8 out of 10 reason this score is lower is because it didn't show the romance as well as they could have there was no buildup only it was there.

Jambroseking

to all my followers I will be reviewing stories both original and fanfic and posting them both in a "story" and like this i will have to be brief but i will be giving my honest opinion so if there are any you suggest please leave a comment

Jambroseking

i forgot to menchen i will only be doing completed stories
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Jambroseking

Hello to one a all I am looking for cover art for my stories I will sight you both in the story and it's description, please send me links or pictures either through a direct message or comment on this message if you need an alternative method I will give you an email address in a private message to send to

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I have had a bad case of writers block and when I do write something it just comes out garbage. So if any of you have any too for getting out of writers block please tell me

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@Rodootjebes check your messages
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Rodootjebes

@Jambroseking might help but watch action/drama movies or show or anime such as berserk, aot or video games but it works person to person so can't say
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