Review for assassin and her prince
This story is a fanfiction of the dragon prince Netflix series, centered on Callum and Rayla. It was written before the airing of season 2 are more accurately before the author watched season 2. Therefore there are some Canon discrepancies, but are completely understandable in trueness to the characters they receive a 9 out of 10.
Grammatically speaking the story has very few flaws I only found one maybe two spelling errors or grammatical errors which they were mostly in the dialogue but they get a passing grade there. The scenes were a little choppy in places but it worked with how the story was. In writing capability they received a 9 out of 10
The story was primarily a romance with a small bit of adventure towards the end of it it showed the tension between the humans and the elves at this point in the story as well as the close friendship that had developed between the three main characters. The relationship between Rayla and Calum didn't really show until season 3 of the show but they did a very nice job of showing it here how it was in its early stages and have what it could have become under these circumstances. In story intrigue and plot they receive a 8 out of 10 reason this score is lower is because it didn't show the romance as well as they could have there was no buildup only it was there.