JamiPack

@JamiPack
          thanks for the advice,i really appreciate it,i will not make the same mistakes,i will soon upload the 2nd chapter.au revoir,merci!

@JamiPack
          its the beginning of a novel!
          

Oh no prob and you can critique my stuff anytime! Believe me I don't mind constructive critisicm!

@storymaker77 thank you so much for responding :) I will be sure to fan you and take a look at your stuff too!! Stories are the best and let me know if you would like a critique at any time! 

Oh you sound like a totally sweet person and I love reading and writing too! But why else would I join wattpad lol!