celenateniceeee
I really liked your story, but you changed your point of view and you might want to check your punctuation. It's actually a really good story though... sorry, would've kiked this to you, but I don't have your kik.
celenateniceeee
@JasmineMaybe when Sarah and Naomi were on the phone. you said "..." i thanked her . and then you switched back to 3rd person