JayGoneRogue

@JayGoneRogue good job

@Mr_SJG It's late for me but I can definitely do that as soon as I can get some free time bud

Hey, I appreciate you being honest with me about the chapters. I actually went back and took what you said seriously. I’ve been working on restructuring and rewriting the story so it reads more like the comic-style story I originally envisioned rather than the older drafts. I also added an author’s note explaining the history of the project and how AI was used during the writing process, because I want to be completely transparent about it. If you don’t mind, I’d really appreciate it if you could take another look at the new version, including the author’s note, and tell me honestly what you think. Especially whether the writing feels more natural and whether the story itself is coming through better. I’m not looking for you to tell me it’s good just to be nice. If something still feels off, I’d rather you tell me directly. I appreciate you pointing it out in the first place.

@Mr_SJG It's no problem boss. The only advice I would give is to ease up on the AI. When it becomes noticeable, it becomes a problem because AI's writing has no emotions.

@Vven10 It's definitely a spin off. More Mater centered. It reminds me of how the Fast and the Furious movies got more high tech and "spy-like" instead of focusing on racing like it originally was supposed to be.

@JayGoneRogue I love the trilogy, although personally I think the second movie is out of place compared to 1 and 3. I didn’t think it was bad per se, but it felt more like a spin off than a sequel

@Solazeer That's how you know it's top quality. Cars 1 could stand alone without 2, but at the same time, 2 compliments it pretty well. Same thing with 3. 

@2econdking Wow! Thanks so much for recommending me like that! (I’ll pass you your check later, lol)

Hey man, everything good? Also how is the Gachiakuta story going, just curious?

@MariusB05 So far so good, I'm gonna bulk upload them

Just great my friend, just wondering how the Gachiakuta story is going?

Hey my friend, just wondering if you can give me a hit for the Gachiakuta story?

Great can’t wait! 

@MariusB05 I've actually finished planning, I'm getting ready to write now.

@2econdking 
            
            That's okay. I don't worry about it. I guess I can say I haven't fully accepted it.

@Combatmoster44 My condolences dude... I'm sorry to hear that. I know it's hard losing people close to you.

@2econdking 
            
            A few of my residents passed away. My grandmother was on my mom's side and an uncle on my stepdad side.

Understandable but I am looking forward to your story, I know it will be good. Good luck 

@MariusB05 I'm just waiting until a good amount of hype builds up

@MariusB05 oh yeah, I've finally started watching it myself

Idea 3: Y/N vital instrument is boxing gloves that transform into powerful gauntlets. With every hit the punches gets faster and heavier (like Derieri for sds). Loves to fight and to brawl, as like a brother relationship with Rudo. Him and Riyo often tease each other but also secretly love each other very much. The boxing glory belonged to his dad who was a fighter in a underground fight club on the ground, he died Y/N wear the gloves to always remember his dad
            
            Powers: More punches, the faster and heavier they become, can charge up his punches into one final knockout but doing so takes away a lot of energy 
            
            Weakness: If he stops the punches for 3 minutes the power resets, fighting for to long puts a strain on his arms and hands

If you have more, you can send them. But the ones you gave me are working great. I'm always open for more

If you want I could suggest more Gachiakuta ideas and just wondering, how is the ideas I gave you working?