Jedi_Raptor

Now last question regarding "Game becomes reality" 
          	
          	I have the first chapter almost done, and already in a writing spree to be working on the second chapter. 
          	
          	How should I publish it? 
          	
          	Delete the original chapter and paste mine in? 
          	
          	Delete the work and reposte it? 
          	
          	Keep the old work up as (unfinished) and then publish a second book with the rewrite? 

shroom_mush_

@Jedi_Raptor I think keeping the old one and making the new one seperate would work best. You could even add a chapter in the old one letting people know it's being re written? But idk, it's your choice :)
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Queen_Rin-akumakage

@Jedi_Raptor keep up the old one as unfinished and put the new one as a rewrite 
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Jedi_Raptor

Now last question regarding "Game becomes reality" 
          
          I have the first chapter almost done, and already in a writing spree to be working on the second chapter. 
          
          How should I publish it? 
          
          Delete the original chapter and paste mine in? 
          
          Delete the work and reposte it? 
          
          Keep the old work up as (unfinished) and then publish a second book with the rewrite? 

shroom_mush_

@Jedi_Raptor I think keeping the old one and making the new one seperate would work best. You could even add a chapter in the old one letting people know it's being re written? But idk, it's your choice :)
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Queen_Rin-akumakage

@Jedi_Raptor keep up the old one as unfinished and put the new one as a rewrite 
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Jedi_Raptor

What a great time to be rewriting Game become Reality, right guys? 
          
          Just kicking out characters and adding new ones in... 
          
          Who wants some Qsmp cameos? :D 

VanillaMilk_Boy

Jedi_Raptor! Didnt you write a tubeclash ff? Whwre did it go?

Jedi_Raptor

@VanillaMilk_Boy It has a big nostalgia factor and I do love it. It was my very first fanfiction and had a lot of potential in it's plot. 
            
            But well... it was written by a 12 year old and had the wording and shipping to show for it. 
            
            So looking at it as an adult, it was really embarrassing. 
            
            So I want to rewrite it in a style that I've developed over the years of writing and can actually be proud of.
            
            Of course it's still a bit awkward with certain ships that I can't take out (sadly) but hey, the nostalgia factor is still there 
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VanillaMilk_Boy

@VanillaMilk_Boy ooo i would love to have it re-written! I remember reading it years ago! Its quiete nostalgic actually 
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Jedi_Raptor

@VanillaMilk_Boy I did, I have unpublished it a little while ago 
            
            Quite the embarrassing thing, really
            
            I did plan on rewriting it in a better style at some point... 
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Jedi_Raptor

Thank you for the nice replies! 
          
          You guys do have a point that it would be beneficial for the people that do not have an Ao3 account or just don't use the platform. 
          
          It wouldn't put that much stress on me, since I write my chapters in Word and paste them over into Ao3 once done. The stressful part is remembering to update both sites. 
          
          I will get started on pasting over the two stories I have on Ao3 soon, so you guys can see what I have been up to. 
          
          I am also officially starting on the GbR rework with the help of a friend! 
          
          Those will probably still take a little bit and I will most likely delete GbR and then repost it with the new chapters, since a few characters will be removed and the existing comments might be confusing. 
          
          Dw, I will only delete it once I have ALL edited chapters ready. 
          
          Anyways, it's nice to see you all again and recognize some faces!

WatcherWraith

@Jedi_Raptor I wish you all the best :]
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Jedi_Raptor

@ShockleyKayla145 well I haven't been silent and gone, just on a different site 
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Jedi_Raptor

Hello everyone!
          
          Long time no see, eh? 
          
          I have been quite busy and, as I have already mentioned before, been posting regularly over on Ao3. 
          
          A few days ago I opened Wattpad again for the first time in months and I have to admit, I do miss it a little bit. 
          
          Plus, there are a few stories here that I never transferred over or continued writing, which is a shame, I really liked some of these ideas. 
          
          So now I am considering to have a dual-set-up in which I post on both sites at the same time. 
          
          This would include two new stories that I have over on Ao3 that I never published here, which have been my main works for almost a year now. 
          
          I would also try my best to finally fully rework "Game become reality", which has been my plan for a while now. 
          
          This post is more to see if there even is interest in me posting on here still, or if I should just keep to Ao3 for now. What do you think?

WatcherWraith

@Jedi_Raptor As long as it doesn't burn you out, I'd love to see more of your stuff :]
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WriterMelody234

@Jedi_Raptor i say... do what makes you comfortable it's good to try and reah out to a wider audience in different sites, (^_^) 
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shroom_mush_

@Jedi_Raptor I think you should do what works best, but I do like the idea of dual posting.
            
            Idk though, it's been a while since I've read your stories, so I'm probably not the target audience.
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Jedi_Raptor

Quick update for everyone and a question for you guys. 
          
          I have officially started to edit rewrite "When the game becomes reality" for Ao3! So be prepared for the first chapter there very soon. 
          
          Now the question. My edit includes completely shifting the story a little, since it's obviously a little older and my interest has changed. 
          
          Or more specifically, the story will be Phil centric, since he's my favorite (duh). Which means the first few chapters with Dream and George will get completely wiped and instead we follow Phil's PoV instead. 
          
          On top of that, some characters will be replaced, as I just don't like the streamers that much anymore and only want to write characters that I feel comfortable to write.  
          
          Don't worry, SBI will stay whole and people like Badboyhalo will also stay  :) 
          
          Just kinda wanted to see if people would be upset with this kind of rewrite? I don't know how much you liked the whole Dream and George part... 

Sarah_Mist

Lolz I’m all for it- as a fellow chatter of the crow community, I agree; Philza is Pog.
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Sleepy_birdy43

@Jedi_Raptor  yoo, fellow crow here, I'm excited ^v^, bet it's going to great :D
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WatcherWraith

@Jedi_Raptor Phil and Techno are best Bois, we want to hear more about them :]
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Jedi_Raptor

Hello everyone!
          
          It's been a little while since I was online here, hasn't it? 
          
          The main reason for that is that I am getting more attached to Ao3 at the moment, both to read and to write. 
          
          On top of that, I am a little lost at how to continue Game becomes reality right now, both from plot and motivation. 
          
          So I have decided, for now, that I will transfer my English works to Ao3. Not just transfer them, but edit and rewrite some parts I am not happy with, covering plot holes and removing certain... characters... that I heavily dislike now despite the story being good. 
          
          So, to sum it up, right now there will be no new chapters, but all my works will be transfered to my Ao3 account, which has the same name as this one. The stories on Ao3 will be newly edited and (hopefully) improved. 
          
          (A tale of humans and hybrids as well as the Cursed AU is already transfered, but not edited yet)
          
          See you guys around! 

Sleepy_birdy43

@Jedi_Raptor, I'll see you over at Ao3 ^v^. I can't wait for more updates. Take your time 
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