Jeff Dawson

coooool! I'm a big kid with this stuff!!!

Good morning Heath, Gateway is a mix of scifi, history and political intrigue. I'm working on the third book in the series, Target Berlin.

I think I might try gateway though I love scifi

hey jeff!!! the first chapter of cracking up is enjoyable... thorough writing

Hahaha . Wow you live in texas ihave a new update . I wish you like it .

You could say that. Live in Texas. I think English is my first language, but some of my friends might disagree with the assumption. :)

Because of some of them are not english because some readers are filipino . Like me . Your a foreigner ?

Not a problem. It's your story, but since it appears to be in present time, make it believable for the readers. Now,pages two and three did not have an English translation, so I can't add much there. Overall, a good first effort. Continue on. 

I wrote the rules that Shane wants in their school 

Thank you thank you .