I have rewrote chapter 1 on "The last piece of flesh" so if you like I would appreciate it if you check it out and I'll be re-writing chapters 2 till 17 over the next few weeks I hope you don't mind it's just because it was my first book and I feel like now after re-reading it, it should have more details in the chapters and they should be a bit longer and I just really need to fix them up in general.
Thank you :)