JillStroberger

@Pyrography 
          	you are very welcome...I actually can't stop reading :) so, thank you for this wonderful story and for keeping the old world with your new.

aDropofBeauty

Hey, just wanted to thank you for the vote and lovely comment you left on my story ^___^
          
          I have a few other works (which admittedly need some serious revisions) which you might like: "Autumn's Fall" is completed while "The Journal of Nephelli" is ongoing and updated bimonthly, generally.

JillStroberger

I really, really love the feel of this story. The end makes me wish it were a short story in itself. Minor puncuation and maybe some sentence structure are the only hang ups for me...but as you know everyone's a critic lol ;) I hope I don't offend. Thank you so much for sharing this, you are great!

gvryel64

Thank you so much for all the votes on Earth's Altar! Much appreciated. I do hope you enjoyed the story.

gvryel64

@JillStroberger Just saw this note. Thanks for taking the time to comment on the story. I appreciate that very much. So glad you enjoyed it, particularly the characters. I find it a struggle to develop characters in a plot-dominated story like this. Still tweaking Peter's character, trying to reveal more of his feelings. If I could start this story from scratch, I might write more from Delbert's, Demi's and Davila's perspectives.
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JillStroberger

You're welcome. Your story was AMAZING! Very well thought out, and executed. Characters were relatable, as a reader it was easy to develop feelings and investment in their wellbeing, making it a sit on the edge of your seat/ cannot read fast enough thrill ride. Thank you so much for writting this. Your bringing together of religious mysticism and science made for a wonderful, thought provoking mystery. Cheers!
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FayLane

Thank you so much, Jill, for all the reads and votes on my work <3

FayLane

*speechlessly tosses heart-shaped confetti and scuttles away to blush in her grotto*
            
            <3
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JillStroberger

You are very welcome :) thank YOU for writting! Your worlds -and they are worlds, so much more than stories- are amazing and feel so real, well thought out and great characters with interesting themes.  You have a great talent! River Belly is another personal favorite-AMAZING! YOU ROCK! Best wishes.
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