Joseph Clark

I'm just glad to be remembered :) if possible, try to point out things that you feel haven't been explained clearly as well as the usual please :)

 Hey :) I'm really sorry I haven't gotten to your critique yet. I promise I will get to it. I've just been really busy cramming and stuff and then when I finished with my test, my brain was fried, and was forced into a lot of family bonding activities etc. Anyways...I will get it to you as soon as possible (aka tomorrow, hopefully?) :))
          
          And aww thank :) i didn't see that comment below haha XD

Don't be silly, you have some pretty good stuff to look at, and your critiquing goes a long way, you're the perfect person to fan :P

 Thank you so much for fanning :D It means a lot to me! :))

Sorry I've not been able to read your chapter properly yet. I shall try some time this week as my work load should drop off sightly. IF you have the chance, do you reckon you could read through the chapter I've posted and tell me what you think. I feel like there is something wrong with it but I can't figure it out. Thank you! 

Well I suppose you should :P Though if it had been me then the embarrassment level would have increased again, being the English students and all!

@JosephClark You'd have noticed eventually :P Anyway I felt bad about it.

You could have gotten away with it, I hadn't noticed :P

@JosephClark Even with the typo? I do apologise for that but it would seem that my typing is starting to fail me once again.

@lollagirl I am enjoying, the scenery has thus improved :P