JumbledSymphony

Before she could even spread her hands, she felt a tightening around her neck and it was a matter of seconds before she started gasping for air. It was all too sudden for her to understand anything. As a reflex action, her hands went to her neck and she felt a rope. Within seconds, it dawned upon her that she was being strangled by him. In the meantime, he looked down at her, watching her face turning absolutely red and he had to admit, it was a painful sight to behold. Yet, he had no choice. His heart broke but still, he kept tightening the rope. His breathing had turned heavy yet to let her have a peaceful death, he spoke, “I’m sorry to do this to you, but if not for this, you’ll be having a more painful death. ”
          	
          	And after struggling for a few minutes, he saw her eyes rolling back and hands going loose, conforming to her death.
          	
          	A lone tear escaped his eyes when he saw her lifeless form. In a broken voice, he whispered, “She spares no one.”
          	
          	Complete prologue of my new story "Tremors" is uploaded for you to read, vote and write a review.

whyisthisfictional

OMG !!! You probably don't have any idea how much you made me happy by just voting ( not for votes)
          Your book has been always my precious gems as what a masterpiece you have have written....
          I'm on cloud nine that atleast you read only one chapter because this isn't what I was expecting. ❤️

whyisthisfictional

@JumbledSymphony Hehe so sweet of you !
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whyisthisfictional

@JumbledSymphony That's such a precious moment for me :) Please offer your suggestions as story would be surely cliche...at some points !!!!
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JumbledSymphony

@whyisthisfictional nah, dude! I'll read. Had a busy day at office. Will read for sure ❤️
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JumbledSymphony

Before she could even spread her hands, she felt a tightening around her neck and it was a matter of seconds before she started gasping for air. It was all too sudden for her to understand anything. As a reflex action, her hands went to her neck and she felt a rope. Within seconds, it dawned upon her that she was being strangled by him. In the meantime, he looked down at her, watching her face turning absolutely red and he had to admit, it was a painful sight to behold. Yet, he had no choice. His heart broke but still, he kept tightening the rope. His breathing had turned heavy yet to let her have a peaceful death, he spoke, “I’m sorry to do this to you, but if not for this, you’ll be having a more painful death. ”
          
          And after struggling for a few minutes, he saw her eyes rolling back and hands going loose, conforming to her death.
          
          A lone tear escaped his eyes when he saw her lifeless form. In a broken voice, he whispered, “She spares no one.”
          
          Complete prologue of my new story "Tremors" is uploaded for you to read, vote and write a review.

whyisthisfictional

To began with..I offer my apology for posting message without being much considerate 
          The matter which I want to convey through this message is about your historical book ❤️
          
          Lady..It's been a year since I have read that masterpiece and whenever i glimpse at your book..my heart welled up with immense joy and my lips lifts up as it was great journey yet blessing to read it...Everything in that book was shaped perfectly and indeed it deserves much appreciations ✨ I can remember the astonishment I felt when you unfold the depth of secret...and that's the reason why I suggest this book to every new reader on wattpad 
          
          The thing which disappoint my heart is your numbers of reader as I feel that it should get more readers...Truth to be told when my eyes fell on the cover of it then I didn't  found it much intersting as the cover appear not so crystal clear and seems as if this is story of some boring era  and then I read description and my sincerest apology but it doesn't show the sparks of book..not even a bit I mean description doesn't reflect the actual worth of book as it is too simple...I have been pondering to drop this message since past 8 months but find it offensive...and It's completely alright if you don't agree on my words as It's your book and it should be according to you..but being a fan of it I couldn't help but post this 
          
          
          
          Love your book ❤️

JumbledSymphony

@whyisthisfictional Hello! Gratitude for reading my book and I'm grateful you dropped this message to me. My inbox are always open. Also, I'm not offended even a bit. I always appreciate views of my readers and thanks for being so considerate. About the cover, I've put it as one of the readers made it for me and for the description, I'll try to make it better. Thank you once again
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