Justice Neyedli

I am sill working on chapter 2 and 3 and will continue making the story 

I published my first chapter but want it feed back if need to be better it would help a lot 

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your perry the platipus yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

thank you very much
          

your a koala

thank you

your a kangaroo
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