I just want to say that I’m a huge fan. This overarching story with multiple plot lines is pretty amazing. I love the amount of time you put into fleshing out the characters, as well as all the imagery you use. Also, shout out to the artist for the phenomenal work on all the pictures you’ve included. If I had to find a negative critique, I’d say you should probably have a buddy do some editing for you. Punctuation, spelling, stuff like that. Although, I gotta say that it doesn’t really detract from the overall experience. And if it means your breakneck writing pace stays on track, I don’t mind the few errors you might have. Overall, I think your writing is outstanding and it’s absolutely criminal that you don’t have a wider audience (pun intended). Please keep up the stellar work!!