Juxtaterrestrial

My weight gain novella Weighted Grades is out now!
          	
          	What better way to spend an observed holiday than with a book glorifying obesity?
          	
          	You can read the first chapter for free here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/274321373-weighted-grades or https://www.deviantart.com/juxtaterrestrial/art/Weighted-Grades-Chapter-1-Out-now-Link-below-882050318
          	
          	Or if you want to see what other people think first, you can check out my twitter post that highlights some of the comments I've received about it: https://twitter.com/Juxtaterrestria/status/1412087756730384394
          	
          	Either way you can buy the book here: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0979H18LZ
          	
          	if you do please rate and review - it helps me so much!
          	 #weightgain #belly #feeder

Juxtaterrestrial

My weight gain novella Weighted Grades is out now!
          
          What better way to spend an observed holiday than with a book glorifying obesity?
          
          You can read the first chapter for free here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/274321373-weighted-grades or https://www.deviantart.com/juxtaterrestrial/art/Weighted-Grades-Chapter-1-Out-now-Link-below-882050318
          
          Or if you want to see what other people think first, you can check out my twitter post that highlights some of the comments I've received about it: https://twitter.com/Juxtaterrestria/status/1412087756730384394
          
          Either way you can buy the book here: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0979H18LZ
          
          if you do please rate and review - it helps me so much!
           #weightgain #belly #feeder

Andrew219958

I just want to say that I’m a huge fan. This overarching story with multiple plot lines is pretty amazing. I love the amount of time you put into fleshing out the characters, as well as all the imagery you use. Also, shout out to the artist for the phenomenal work on all the pictures you’ve included. If I had to find a negative critique, I’d say you should probably have a buddy do some editing for you. Punctuation, spelling, stuff like that. Although, I gotta say that it doesn’t really detract from the overall experience. And if it means your breakneck writing pace stays on track, I don’t mind the few errors you might have. Overall, I think your writing is outstanding and it’s absolutely criminal that you don’t have a wider audience (pun intended). Please keep up the stellar work!!

Juxtaterrestrial

@Andrew219958 I actually have a backlog of errors to fix from people submitting reports. Something like 500 long at this point.
            
            But yeah, the goals of the project were to make the story with plot and character development on a consistent timeline. So getting every error fixed takes a back seat to the deadline.
            
            But thank you so much for the comment! It's very much a write what you want to read type project.
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vinom710

You should post more images, or if you have more images posted somewhere can you point me in the location of where they’re posted

Juxtaterrestrial

@vinom710 I think I've posted all the art I've had made so far. I usually have one or two images a month made by my artist. So they lag behind the story quite a bit. I have all the images so far uploaded here: https://sta.sh/21opbn5s99at?edit=1
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