Hi! I'm sorry, but I don't know how to private message somebody! I saw your add for critiques and I was wondering if you could do my story? I only have the first chapter and half of the second done. I just want your honest opinion on it! I'm brand new to this site, so I don't even know if I have to do something special for you to read it. If you need me to do something or if you want to, please comment! Thank you so much, either way! I'm just about to read some of your book, Hunted. Thanks, again!