Kadee33

@bedda357 Mez really writes some heart wrenching stories. Just a warning don't read them at work. I couldn't stop the waterworks. I started reading a book called His Last Request, but I don't think I'll continue it. The father/daughter relationship was off putting and the male love interest was disturbing to the point that he sounded like a stalker. It ashame, because  her writing was good. Although a tad over descriptive in one part cannot hold that against her as I've done the same thing once or twice. I'll take a look at your book tomorrow at scout camp, I'll have some time to kill.
          	If you get a chance to look at mine, that would be nice. The second chapter is a little slow, but I think the rest is pretty good. Talk at you later.

Kadee33

@bedda357 Mez really writes some heart wrenching stories. Just a warning don't read them at work. I couldn't stop the waterworks. I started reading a book called His Last Request, but I don't think I'll continue it. The father/daughter relationship was off putting and the male love interest was disturbing to the point that he sounded like a stalker. It ashame, because  her writing was good. Although a tad over descriptive in one part cannot hold that against her as I've done the same thing once or twice. I'll take a look at your book tomorrow at scout camp, I'll have some time to kill.
          If you get a chance to look at mine, that would be nice. The second chapter is a little slow, but I think the rest is pretty good. Talk at you later.

bedda357

Hi I've just read the first chapter of Mezmerised Flying on the wings of Dragons and fanned her and commented that I thought it was a beautifully written and well-crafted piece of work.  I asked if she would kindly have a look at my two efforts, Peter and Jake.  She was about to go on holiday and said she would have a look when she got back.  However she has messaged again to say she skimmed one and didn't think she could wait that long before reading them both properly.  She also suggested I contact you and ask if you could spare the time to have a look for me and to say that she had recommended me, which is most kind.  I would be very grateful to receive your honest appraisal and look forward to reading your work also.  Regards Anne-Leslie Gilbert

Kadee33

Soccer is over, 2 weeks of baseball left and will finish cub scouts June 15. Hope to start writing again at that time. So Doc, any tornados yet. I remember they started blowing through about this time. Seems like we got one every 4th of July holiday. I really miss KS. No fireworks in NJ. My grandpa set off the township fireworks when I was a kid. I hate that my son cannot legally do them in our backyard like I did. My older son goes to TX, so he gets the whole experience.  Such a bummer. Anyway as soon as we get some clear weather we'll open the pool and waterproof the deck or visa versa. Tell me how the new job goes Doc. Talk at ya later.

Kadee33

My next chap will be in 2 parts, a PG-13 & R. I've had 1 night in the past month at home. Spring kills me. Between OT, soccer, baseball, scouts & musical theater, I don't get a breather for about 3 months. I did get 2 weeks to drive my motorcycle to work, but that's about it. Hope all is going well. How's school coming along?