KainGodchilds

What do you think of making one huge collaborative song/poem together?
          	
          	Let's join hands and write the longest possible song about the things we're grateful for, the happy memories we created and all the wonderful friendships we've built along the way 
          	
          	Spread the word and join this challenge ^w^
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/380679303

Sohinigoswami

@KainGodchilds 
          	  Carol already wrote her piece.
          	  Mind going next? 
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lyttlejoe

@KainGodchilds
          I thought missing notifications were just me for some reason. Thank you for your very gracious comment and support, it hasn't gone unnoticed, believe me.

KainGodchilds

@lyttlejoe The notifications problem is wide spread, I'm afraid, and I noticed it applies to new chapters, new stories and even announcements and mentions
            
            I mean every word I said, my friend, you're one of the best writers and one of my favourite ones; I always look forward to reading your stories - they always make my day ^w^
            
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Sohinigoswami

KainGodchilds

@Sohinigoswami  Brussels time, morning (9:23h) as we speak and it's November 27th
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Sohinigoswami

@KainGodchilds / got it. 
            That means your time zone is GMT+1 
            
            My time zone is 4:30 hours ahead of you. 
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Sohinigoswami

@KainGodchilds / GMT+5:30. Its afternoon right now. (1:15pm) and the date is 27th November.
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BillTemple1957

Morning ... I made a couple minor changes to the lyrics to keep the melody and rhyming in time. I need your approval or if you want, I will post as you wrote it. Let me know.
          Bill
          ~~~~~~~~~~~
          When the world turns grim, dark and cold, 
          And Loneliness has us in its hold, 
          We no longer care for Life, its true, ya 
          The sun, the stars, 
          Seen from afar, 
          Still shine brightly; see that Morning Star
          It draws from our lips a hopeful Hallelujah 
          
          Hallelujah, Hallelujah 
          Hallelujah, Hallelujah 
          
          We lost our voice, but will find once more
          Our song's within, just like before
          Listen, we can hear the beat, in tune, ya
          Hear the drums, they are deep within,  
          Our inner band, marching again
          Chanting an encouraging Hallelujah
          
          Hallelujah, Hallelujah
          Hallelujah, Hallelujah
          
          Listen, there's still Love inside
          Let's speak our mind, no longer hide
          Don't let Fear paralyze and consume us  
          Just reach out our heart, Penance be damned
          And love ourselves, Hope holds our hand
          Singing a soft, outspoken Hallelujah
          
          Hallelujah, Hallelujah
          Hallelujah, Hallelujah

BillTemple1957

@KainGodchilds You have to keep the tune in your head. In songs sometimes they stretch certain syllables to suit the melody. It takes time, but it will come to you eventually. Always keep the tune alive.
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KainGodchilds

@BillTemple1957  I love this version and approve you using it instead ^w^
            
            Can you give me tips to keep the melody and rhyming better in time? I focused on the amount of syllables, but it's true that long and short ends give different outcomes melody and timing wise
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KainGodchilds

What do you think of making one huge collaborative song/poem together?
          
          Let's join hands and write the longest possible song about the things we're grateful for, the happy memories we created and all the wonderful friendships we've built along the way 
          
          Spread the word and join this challenge ^w^
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/380679303

Sohinigoswami

@KainGodchilds 
            Carol already wrote her piece.
            Mind going next? 
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