I write for fun and my own distraction so you won't find many, if any, rules of correct story line structure, POV or even punctuation.
What you read is what you get. The stories and poems  I present here are for whatever pleasure readers find in them.
I also read the way I write - for entertainment, so my comments are often in that vein. ALSO ALL MY STORIES ARE COMPLETED PRIOR TO POSTING ANY CHAPTERS - EXCEPT OF COURSE SOME CHALLENGE ENTRIES.
Comments, critiques, questions, all welcome; it's always fun getting to know readers and other authors.
Also want to recommend some great authors I have met here-
https://www.wattpad.com/199328033-awsome-writers-and-poets-writers-poets
NOTE: This list is incomplete but it is becoming a bit overwhelming to maintain, so until I get a lot more time, it will not be updated very often. Thanks for understanding.

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