I would very much appreciate it if you could proof-read and edit the beginning chapter of a story I'm about to post... please critique my work so I can fix it and become better. I really would love this story to become all that I dream of it. Thank you! I trust you as a writer, and you only. Please let me know ASAP.
@hiphop4em
I miss you so much too. I haven't seen you in forever. Yes, we need to hang out, but currently mom's in Africa. But I will nag her until she calls your mom so we can come over. And I love you so so so super duper more than words can express :)