Hi guys, just read through my prologue and thought: could do better, so here it is again. Happy to hear or rather read any comments/critiques. Hopefully will have chapter three up by the end of the week.
Hi guys, I’ve just uploaded the second part of 'The Secrets of Eternity' (chapter 1 after the prologue). I welcome any feedback – if you think sentence structure or imagery are clumsy please tell me. Or even if you just get bored! I’ve dedicated this chapter to CMQuinn who first read The 'Secrets of Eternity' and so generously recommended it. Thanks.
Hi there!
I just wanted to reach out and say thank you for adding Serpent's Daughter to your reading list! I noticed your comment and I'm so glad you like the chapter so far :) I hope you enjoy the rest of the story and feel free to leave behind any comments/feedback as you go.
Thanks again <3
Have a wonderful day :D