KataliAwesome247

@Funnyluna123432
          Its alright! I'd support anyone that creates stories or art or animations. Because I think thats amazing that authors and artists are brave enough to put themselves out there. I think I've supported at least 10 authors on here since I've only just started reading these a few weeks ago.  Some of them responded and some didn't, mayne because the book was completed.
          I "make" art but im still mediocre and plus I'm a bit too shy to actually put them on the internet. (Mainly pokemon.. but I will draw what I think is realistic for my brother because his birthday is in a few months and it would be hard to draw a realistic cat...)

KataliAwesome247

@Funnyluna123432 
          Oh okay! Well in a few days(Thursday) the crown tundra will come out. Also good luck defeating the gyms. And you don't need to put pressure on yourself. People can wait y'know.. I wouldn't mind if it took a year for the next chapter to finish.  Plus if you were to split up the chapters then you'd be able to take longer breaks. Sort of like the authors on webtoon.

KataliAwesome247

@Funnyluna123432 
          I did.  but seriously... do your hands hurt?! 
          Separate it into regular length next time cuz' that one could be at least 6 or 7 chapters. I know it sounds like complaining but I don't mean to.
          I really liked that you added "baby mine" in there.
          
          Also--- by any chance do you have pokemon shield? If so can we trade later? I need zamazenta to complete the pokedex.. but don't worry I'll trade it back right after I collect the pokedex page from the pokemon.

KataliAwesome247

@Funnyluna123432  Jesus thats was long!
          Maybe you should have made it into four or five chapters instead of a really long one so you could take a few weeks relaxing instead or study for school.. (btw is your hands okay?? Lol) it was really good. However there were a few minior grammar errors which I don't blame you for tbh I would make them too. 
          As someone (me lol) whom is bad at english because of my grammar(Or at least what I think..), yours is amazing. Of course a few occasional minor mistakes but you can barely notice them. Its really good in detail btw since you were asking.