1meek1

Hey, I wanted to message you about this personally but I don't think they have the option. It may just be me, but I think "guffawed" would give most people pause. I had to stop and look the word up myself. Don't get me wrong, your work is beautifully written so I'm not making any suggestions on it... but I thought you should know. 
          
          I've been getting criticisms, as of late for using a few choice words of my own. My mentor keeps telling me "the thesaurus isn't always you friend". Lol

KayMantis

Thank you for letting me know! I’m not sure where I even heard “guffawed,” it was just in some dusty corner of my brain, so it might be uncommon. and it’s sort of a clunky word as well. “Laughed merrily” would work just as well and flows better, lol. I really appreciate the feedback!
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