Kay_Asher

Oh thank you :))

@jeanette_moser you're most welcome :D

@ladyjenStories what do you mean? 

@BobbyWard I really appreciate you saying that.  I will surely keep those tips in mind when I write.  Thank you so much.  

Try to make your story as easy as possible for your reader to understand. Sometimes you need to explain stuff that might seem really obvious to you using words that aren't technical terms. I think your dialogue is very natural sounding. You've clearly thought how your different characters would talk and they each have their own voice. I love to leave each chapter with a question mark over what will happen next to make my reader keen to read on when I next update my story. Hope this s helpful.

Sure,I'll read your story. If  you are updated with everything had Change (:

@JacceB hey!   I'll definitely use start using paragraphs.  Thanks so much! 

@jeanette_moser Hi Jeanette, I would definitely recommend using paragraphs. Every time someone speaks it should be on its own, not mixed in with other people's speech. This would make it much easier to read :) Bec x

@JacceB I honestly haven't been able to read your story yet, the title sounds very intriguing I must say.   I was just wondering, I just wrote a story and was wondering if you could maybe give me some tips on how I can make it better. thanks.   

@BobbyWard I love wattpad.  They're so many great reads on here. I just started reading yours and I like it a lot, it's the only thing I'm reading right now, Haha.  I just wrote a story and I was wondering if you could read it and give me some tips to make it better.  Thanks.