poisonivybitchtypes

Hi! 
          Thank you for being a reader to Olivia Oceans and constantly supporting me throughout. 
          Your votes and comments kept me going. I’m taking a survey kind of a thingy to see how many people want the sequel or if the readers discontinued from the willsfort high series. 
          So, if you want the sequel, please reply to the announcement for the sequel on my notice board! 
          Thank you once again, 
          -N

KayblondyPhillips

@asillylilbrattyslut
            omg hun I've been waiting for the sequel you can't leave Olivia and Jackson like that, they've got unfinished business! They have to have a happy ending!  
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poisonivybitchtypes

Hi!
          I noticed you reading my book... thank you for giving willsfort high a chance and hope you like it... the book will be update soon... I would appreciate your feedback,  positive or negative
          Once again,  thank you for giving my book a chance
          -N

poisonivybitchtypes

@KayblondyPhillips thank you so much for the feedback, means a lot to me. I have some stuff for the romance but you will have to wait lol. And this is my first book so I an lacking proofread and editing but once I finish, I will surely edit it. My grammar is not as bad as it I'd on the book, just some errors lol
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KayblondyPhillips

@asillylilbrattyslut first off your welcome! I'm fully upto date  do you want my honest opinion? Cos there's good and bad and I don't want to hurt your feelings!  You've created a really good bdsm book which I do have to say I never read a college where you have to choose a DOM that's something completely out of the box... hats off to you hun!  You've showed great demonstrations of punishment and rules, could do more with the pleasure side of it... plus omg nearly 100 chapters and Jackson hasn't confessed his true feelings, I think we need a wee bit more romance and spare of moment full of passion and heat, I'd love to see a bit more hunger from jackson his need for her or desperation or just admit his undying love for her   its been months now they need to step up and go to the next level #THEBIGVNEEDSTOBEPOPPED 
            
            Ideas and creativity  ✅ 
            Frustrating as hell (good point) ✅ 
            Only negative me sweet is to proof read your work reread it hun... I'm not a writer myself but I do love my books especially my fanfic  
            
            Please don't take that too personal I know you've worked really hard on this story, when you finish it edited hun x 
            
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